Language Arts Weekly Challenge 5

This is for all of my Language Arts students. In the following paragraph there are several mistakes. Rewrite the paragraph, correcting all of the mistakes, and post in a reply. Remember, this is for a homework grade, so good luck. It is due by the end of the day on Friday, October 1st.

Hannah’s Halloween Scare

Hannah wanted to scare her liddle brother. First, she put on a green frankenstein mask. Then, she hided behind the couch and waited for her brother too come home. When he waked in the door, Hannah jumped out from behind the couch and yelled, Boo! Hannahs brother didnt jump. He didn’t evan look scared at all. He just smiled and said “Oh, hello Hannah.”